REPORTING TO THE UNITED NATIONS HUMAN RIGHTS TREATY BODIES TRAINING GUIDE: Part II — Notes for Facilitators 4. Gathering information and collection of data: who has the information needed? (10 minutes) • Who within the government has the information and data, identified by the group, needed to draft the section of the report on the treaty provision assigned to the group? Please indicate, as far as possible, who would be responsible for providing the different items of information. 5. Identifying elements for good reporting (30 minutes) • Review the badly drafted paragraph of a State party report that has been given to you. • What do you think is good about it? What is insufficient about it? How would you improve the text? 48